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By Hellions Side by ~FrederickNeeds:iconFrederickNeeds:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open


He’s the joker laughing,
King of days, my animal.
The moon’s still in his hair,
No chains to loosen when he lives on
His feet, but earns with my hands.
Blowing me kisses,
Tugging at my dunce cap whilst I sit
In the corner, bed in the wet.

The dark’s his bones –
Plea with any name, he’ll answer to it.

I write in my lover’s gut-end
Among the rank.
Happy mud-hooked face.
I am Duke of nothing
By Hellions side.
©2007-2008 ~FrederickNeeds
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kind of a long story to explain.
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~the-beastie:iconthe-beastie: Aug 11, 2007, 11:59:52 AM
Who is it about? I like it, very well written even though it makes me feel a bit sad. :cuddle:

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Fading bells -
now musky blossoms
peal in dusk.

Literary babblings.
~FrederickNeeds:iconFrederickNeeds: Aug 11, 2007, 12:04:34 PM
it's about some problem i'm going through with ivor at the moment. And i'm glad it made you feel sad (not because i want you to feel sad but because that's what it's meant to do).

:hug:

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"If the English language made any sense, a catastrophe would be an apostrophe with fur."
~the-beastie:iconthe-beastie: Aug 11, 2007, 1:18:39 PM
That's what I thought - hope it works itself out. Big hugs :hug:

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Fading bells -
now musky blossoms
peal in dusk.

Literary babblings.
~tentactically:icontentactically: Aug 11, 2007, 11:55:30 PM
i love this part and every part about the last stanza

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something about a nightmare
~tentactically:icontentactically: Aug 11, 2007, 11:56:01 PM
i meant to say this:
No chains to loosen when he lives on
His feet, but earns with my hands.

part

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something about a nightmare
~FrederickNeeds:iconFrederickNeeds: Aug 12, 2007, 6:02:34 AM
thank you :)

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"If the English language made any sense, a catastrophe would be an apostrophe with fur."
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